Friday, June 8, 2012

A Behind-The-Scenes look at my novel "Rise to the Top"


So I decided to coincide with my book being listed on Amazon, I should give people who have read or are reading my book a behind-the-scenes look at how I went about creating the story, and where I got some of the ideas from. Enjoy!!


All of this started for me on November 4, 2011. That afternoon, I went to the Andover State Bank to deliver a copy of The Trojan Bluestreak newspaper to Andrea Menousek, a very good friend of mine. I asked her if our writing group would be doing any meetings in the near future, and she told me probably not because she wasy busy working on NaNoWriMo (National Novel Writing Month). I asked her about it, and she suggested I look it up.

So I went home and did some research. Knowing I could easily take on the challenge of writing a 50,000 word novel in a span on 30 days (26 for me at that point), I signed up right away. After signing up, the story just sort of popped into my mind.

After writing the prologue and roughly the first half of chapter one, I took a break for the day, and began to outline the rest of the book.

From the very start, I knew basically the entire version of the plot, well I at least knew the basic version of it. I knew there would be four chapters. I knew what would happen in each chapter of the book relating to Brendan's life. I knew the first three chapters would be mostly highlights of Brendan's journalistic career with the final chapter focusing on his involvement in a murder spree. However, I didn't know the entire plot, and the rest came to me as I went along.

For instance, the character Darren Thomas was originally only supposed to appear at Brendan and Gale's wedding. In fact, the name of him was just pulled out of the air. I needed a name for the best friend of the main character and the first name that came to mind was Darren because of my good friend Darren Jones. As I went along writing about the murder spree, Darren (in the book) had a much larger role, eventually becoming a third protagonist.

All of the names which appear in the novel are somehow based on real-life people. In some cases, I simply combined the first name of someone with the last name of somebody else to create their name. But the principal characters were not just named uniquely, they were all based off of important people in my life.

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Main Character Information

Brendan Hopkins: Obviously, he is based off of me. I like to think of Brendan as a "shadowy reflection" of myself. He is very much like me in many ways with fictional elements to his character woven in with the elements based off myself.

Gale Riley-Hopkins: I took Gale's name from the character Gale Weathers in the "Scream" horror movie series. I imagined her as being more like Gale Weather's husband Dewey, but since my main character needed a wife, I made my Gale. She is very much like Dewey, with Brendan being very much like Gale Weathers.

Darren Thomas: Like I said, I originally only intended for the best friend of the main character to appear at the wedding. However, as I was writing chapter four, I needed the main target of the murder spree (besides Brendan) to have some sort of strong connection to Brendan, and that's how Darren was introduced back into chapter four, and slowly became a third main character. He is loosely based on his namesake, Darren Jones, with both of them being extremely smart individuals. What makes them different in the character Darren is more vulnerable than my friend Darren. 

Mrs. Callaway: She is entirely based off my journalism adviser, Mrs. Kristin Baker. Her last name is actually Mrs. Baker's maiden name that I decided to use to make the character somewhat fictional. She is very like Mrs. Baker since she did help jumpstart a journalists's career.

Bobby Hopkins: Bobby is very much like Roman Bridger and Jill Roberts, the killers in Scream 3 and 4 respectively. Like Roman, he is a product of a mistaken pregnancy and was spent his entire life looking for his parents, and was rejected by them. As a result, he seeked his revenge against his parents and the brother who got the life he always sought. Like Jill, he wanted to gain fame as the ultimate killer of someone who has escaped death from other similar killers (Sidney Prescott in the Scream movies, Darren Thomas in my book).

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Major Plot Details

Brendan's journalistic career - Most of the stories in the book written by Brendan were all fictional stories, some based off real events. I think only one actual story written by me that was published in the real-life Trojan Bluestreak made it into the book. That story was the one about Kids 4 Kids. I had intended for my column on human rights to appear in the book, but for some reason, it never made it in, yet there is still mention of it.

Darren's backstory - Before his reappearance in chapter four, Darren was targeted three times by different people to be killed. I don't really know why he was picked, but I based his backstory off of the first three movies in the Scream horror movies series (obviously one of my favorites).  When he appears in chapter four, it's been about five years since the last failed attempt on his life , and he has moved on from those events. His self-help book is meant to be the final part of him moving on with his life. He chose Wichita as the final stop on his book tour, and ironically enough, another murder spree starts, and Darren is once again the target. Like I said, his story is very much like Sidney Prescott's but I wanted to show that men can be just as vulnerable as women  in something like this.

Bobby's murder spree - Inspired mostly by Jill Roberts and Charlie Walker's killing spree in Scre4m (Scream 4). I had him target the same sort of people, but with a different motivation: get revenge on his parents for not accepting him as a son, and at the same time, finally take out Darren Thomas, something three others had previously failed to do.

Henry's attack at the end of the book - When I was writing the ending of the novel when Brendan accepts his Pulitzer Prize, I wanted some sort of major dramatic twist that would totally catch the reader off guard. After re-reading the section where Brendan berates his parents for not telling him the truth about Bobby, and virtually blaming his father for causing the murder spree, I decided to make Henry snap. I wanted the reader to see the powerful impact words have on others, and I think Henry's attack on Brendan truly demonstrates that.

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Final Thoughts:

I just want to express how much fun I had writing this novel. From the very first day, I knew it would be easy for me to achieve my goal in the NaNoWriMo challenge, and all I had to do was tell myself I could do it, and I did. I'm very grateful I did this project; I think it could help jumpstart a writing career for me - one that's not just in journalism. I want to once again extend a special thanks to Alicia Renich for drawing my cover for me, and Darren Jones for volunteering to be my editor. And I want to thank everyone who has read my book, and I hope this little behind-the-scenes looks of it gave you a new insight into the story of Brendan Hopkins and his rise to the top.

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