Friday, June 8, 2012

Barnes and Noble Sight and See


This is actually part of my newspaper final which I got a 97% overall on. On this assignment, I received a 100% and praise from Momma Baker because she noticed that my writing skills have improved dramatically since I was a freshman. The assignment was to go to a public setting and observe what was happening at the place while you were there so I chose Barnes and Noble. I observed some interesting things while I was there and wrote this awesome sight and see piece for it. Enjoy!

Walking into the Eastgate Barnes and Noble store, one would immediately notice the drastic temperature difference from the freezing degrees outside to the heat coming from the heater in the store. The temperature difference is so great that some customers choose to take their jackets off as they wander around the store.

Immediately to the left of the main entrance, a table with a box for donations for a charity called "Childstart for Santa Gift Wrapping" stands with nobody in sight near it. Going through the rest of the store finds a young man, in his early to mid teens intently reading out of a "manga" book; half an hour later, he still hasn't moved.

Near the bathrooms and the left rear end of the store, an employee talks to an elderly man who, combined with his Santa hat and shaggy white beard, looks suspiciously like Santa visiting the store looking for books for the children. A mere foot away is a woman sitting on a loveseat reading her book as she uses her fuzzy green jacket as a blanket.

Continuing through the back of the store brings the customer past the café area. The aroma of hot chocolate and coffee pollutes the air around the café, making it so customers can almost taste chocolate in their mouths.

Walking around to the front of the café, a customer is finishing ordering her drinks. When she is finished, the worker at the register speaks to her.

"Anything else you need?" the worker says and the customer shakes her head no.

Meanwhile, a display of Harry Potter products to the right of the café would be enough for any Harry Potter fan to surge with excitement. Mere inches away, customers shuffle through books on clearance that are stored in boxes right in front of the children's section.

In the children's section, two young girls, possibly sisters, play together, running around in circles away from the books. A mother and daughter stand for a few seconds looking at a certain book before the daughter makes up her mind and walks away.

"You want to think about it?" the mother asks, but the daughter says no and they continue on.

At the cash registers, a blonde woman of about fifty holds her coffee in her hands, talking loudly to a friend on the phone.
"I'm standing in line with coffee and a mug," she says, not caring that she is getting a few eyebrows raised from nearby customers.

Two male and two female employees, all middle-aged, work at the cash registers, effectively checking out customers and assisting them with their needs. One customer, an elderly grandmother sort sparks a conversation with one of the female employees.

"That's for my grandson," she says proudly about one of her purchases.

After checking out, the customers walk back to the main entrance of the store and put their jacket back on, ready to face the freezing temperatures of the outside world once again.

Homecoming


A teenager returns to his hometown from the Witness Protection Program to be the star witness in the case against the man who tried to kill him. This is based partially on the SVU episode "Ghost" where ADA Alex Cabot returns to be a witness in the case against the man who tried to kill her. Enjoy!

The car seemed to appear out of nowhere. It slowly inched its way down the street it had arrived on before slowing down and parking in the driveway of one of houses. Two men exited the car; Captain John Cox of the Special Victims Unit in New York City was the passenger and Special Agent David Renfro was the driver. They approached the house where they noticed the owner was had the curtain of one of his windows open, suggesting he was looking out at them. As the two men approached the house, the curtain closed. They reached the door and before either of them could knock, the door opened. Standing there was Michael Thomas, a high school student from New York who had been presumed shot dead; he had, in actuality, been placed into the Witness Protection Program after the assassination attempt on his life.

What happened?” Michael demanded.

Mike,” David said. “We need to talk to you, privately.”

Mike nodded and allowed the two men into his house. He showed them to the living room and sat on a couch across from them when they had taken their seats. John pulled out a photograph of a man who looked as though there was no way a smile could even be etched onto his face, even with Photoshop.

Who is this?” Mike asked.

His name is Jack Calvert,” John said. “We believe him to be responsible for what happened to you.”

So this is what he looks like,” Mike replied. “Every time somebody glanced at me I thought, ‘Is that him? Is he going to kill me now?’ And now I know, this is the man who tried to kill me. Is there any particular reason as to why he targeted me?”

It was because of what you wrote in your columns in your high school newspaper,” John replied. “Calvert is part of a Pro-Life and Anti-Homosexual group that was known for attacking, but never killing, their enemies. The group has mostly disbanded since your attempted murder, and we connected his murder to you because the bullet used in another murder and attempted murder matched the one to you and to Calvert’s gun. Forensics proved the bullets came from his gun.”

And what do you have that can help put Calvert away?” Mike asked.

We have a ten-year-old victim who has i.d.’d Calvert as the one who tried to kill him,” John said.  “It’s not much, but it should be enough.”

And what makes you so sure that a ten-year-old victim is going to be able to testify in open court?”

I don’t know,” John answered.

Mike sighed before he spoke again.

For years, I always encouraged people to stand up for themselves and fight for what they believe in,” he said. “Now it’s my turn to step up.”

Are you suggesting you return to New York and testify against Calvert?” David asked.

It may be my only choice.”

Mike, you realize that if you return, you put your life at risk for another attack?” said John.

I have lost my home…my school…my friends…my mother died and I couldn’t go to the funeral. Jack Calvert is not going to take my conscience too.”

Two days later, Assistant District Attorney Alexandra Novak dropped the charge of Michael’s murder against Jack Calvert.  When this happened, Calvert’s attorney, Henry Powers, jumped to a conclusion.

Obviously, this is because the People have failed to come up with any evidence to indict my client!”

Save it, Counselor,” Judge Gerald Miller said. “Is there anything else, Ms. Novak?”

Yes, Your Honor. In light of newly discovered evidence, the People move to add another charge to the defendant: Attempted Murder in the First Degree.”

Your Honor,” Powers interjected. “This is merely an attack by the People to charge my client with something useful.”

Mr. Powers, another outburst like that, and I will hold you in contempt!” Miller said. “Who is the complaining witness?”

Michael Thomas,” Alexandra replied. With that, the door behind the witness stand opened and Mike strode through it. He glanced at Calvert sitting at the Defendant’s table, who gave Mike a menacing look. Mike sat down next John and David before the Judge ruled.

Based on what I have seen,” Miller said. “I’m going to continue to remand the Defendant until trial. This court is adjourned.”

Mike smiled, nodded and exited the courtroom with John and David. They took him to Alexandra’s office where she was meeting with Chris Stone; Mike’s best friend who had been the only person besides John who knew Mike had been put into Witness Protection. When they entered, Chris looked over at Mike and ran up to his best friend. The two hugged before Chris spoke. 
Mike, you didn’t have to come back!” he exclaimed.

I know,” Mike replied smiling. “But who else is gonna help them get out of trouble?

For the next few hours, Mike and Alexandra prepared Mike’s testimony for the following day. Once they were finished, Chris brought Mike to his parents’ home, where Mike was going to spend the night and a police officer would be on duty watching the house. After eating with Chris’s parents, the two friends sat together in the living room catching up.

So how is everything?” Chris asked.

They’re okay,” Mike replied sadly.

Have you made any friends?”

A few. I write for my high school newspaper there and I’m known as one of the best writers, and I don’t write any opinion pieces anymore. They all call me my new name, Austin.” At that, Mike was nearly to tears. Chris put his hand on Mike’s shoulder as he spoke.

It’s hard to be someone you’re not.”

I can’t stop thinking about this case like I’m a Prosecutor or something,” Mike cried. “I knew that if I were ever to go to court for something, I would have a plan to attack my enemy in order to make sure justice was served.”

Well, you didn’t see this, yet,” Chris said, pulling out a folder and handing it to Mike. Mike took it and opened it. It was Jack Calvert’s personal file. Chris had obtained it from his father, one of the Detectives working Mike’s case. Mike read over it and began to plan out how he was going to use it to assist in his testimony.

The next morning, Mike was being questioned by Alexandra. He was the first witness to be put on the stand for the day, and answered several of Alexandra’s questions. Mike had quickly answered all of her questions before she asked her final one.

What happened after you were shot?” she asked.

I woke up in the hospital, and the Marshals were there. They told me that I was dead, officially, and that the only way for me to stay alive would be to be placed into the Witness Protection Program.”

Thank you,” Alexandra said. “Your Witness,” he said to Powers.

That sounds like quite an ordeal,” Powers said, standing up and proceeding to the witness stand. “I think we’re all very moved by your experience.”

Do you have a question?” Mike asked.

Only one,” Powers replied. “Did you see my client shoot you?”

I saw his gun aimed at my heart.”

Please, Mr. Thomas, just answer the question. On the night that you were shot, did you see Jack Calvert anywhere in the vicinity?”

No, but he’s a coward. He likes to run away. Did you leave a family behind, Mr. Calvert?”

Your Honor…” Powers said.

Mr. Thomas, please,” Miller said.

You have absolutely no idea who shot you, do you?” asked Powers.

Oh, I have an idea. It’s the kind of man who likes to rape a woman to make her talk,” John replied.

Let me rephrase the question: Did you see Jack Calvert shoot you?”

No, but I know it was him.”

Objection, Your Honor-” Powers started, but Mike kept talking directly at Calvert.

It takes a lot of balls to shoot an unarmed teenager like myself and a sleeping child, too bad your aim was a little better.”

At that, Calvert stood up and began shouting at Mike.

You think you’re safe? They know where you are. You should have stayed dead!”

While all of the shouting was happening, Miller was banging his gavel. When Calvert finished speaking, Miller finally yelled, “That’s enough! We’re in recess until Mr. Powers can learn to control his client!”

Shortly after, the ten-year-old victim, Ashley Jones, testified against Calvert as well in court. When she was finished, neither attorney had any other witnesses and all evidence had been presented. The Jury deliberated for about half an hour before returning with their verdict.

On the first count of the Indictment, Attempted First Degree Murder of Michael Thomas, how do you find?”

Guilty.”

On the count two, the Attempted Murder in the Second Degree of Ashley Jones, what is your verdict?”

Guilty.”

Ladies and Gentlemen of the Jury, you are excused. Thank you for your services. The Defendant is to be remanded until sentencing,” Miller said before banging his gavel.

Later that evening, John, Alexandra, Chris, Chris’s parents and David all met in Alexandra’s office to surprise Mike with a little celebration for the guilty verdict.

Guilty on all counts,” Alexandra said.

I never doubted it’d be anything else,” Chris’s father, Casey, replied.

Let’s get this party started,” Chris said, placing a cake on Alexandra’s desk.

Mike knew just how to push Jack Calvert’s buttons,” John said.

Well, he’s a great witness. Make a great prosecutor one day,” Casey said.

And you gave him the ammunition,” John replied. Casey gave him a slightly guilty look before opening the cake. Meanwhile, David was offering Alexandra a drink.

Oooh, don’t let me drink too much,” Alexandra said. “Penalty phase starts first thing in the morning.”

Slam dunk,” David said. “Live a little tonight.”

Suddenly, somebody knocked twice on the door.

Is that him? Is that him?” David asked.

The door opened and there stood Mike.

Surprise!” everyone shouted.

Mike laughed before hugging everyone and thanking them. He also announced that he would be moving back to New York within six months after withdrawing from the Witness Protection Program. Chris and his parents had offered up their home for him to stay while he finished high school and went off to college. They began eating cake and celebrating their victory in getting justice served. All was well.

Closure

A teenager opens up to his best friend about the events that occurred in his past which caused him to end up where he was. After, he is attacked and decides to settle the score with his past along with help from his friend. Enjoy!


Billy Thompson sat with his good friend, Jake Michaels, who was about a year and a half younger than him, at a dining table in a restaurant, a few days before Halloween. As they sat together talking, Billy revealed some things about his life Jake did not expect.

I’m not who you think I am,” he said.

Okay, who are you?” Jake asked.

My name isn’t Billy Thompson,” Billy continued.

Oooh, what is it?”

John Tate,” Billy replied. “I changed my name before I went into hiding.”

That’s like the Witness Protection Program or something,” Jake said. “What did you do, rat out the mob or something?”

John laughed before continuing. “My brother killed my sister, when she was 17.”

That’s horrible,” breathed Jake. “How did he do that?”

With a really big sharp kitchen knife,” John replied. “They locked him up for a long time, but he got out and he came after me, but I got away. But he killed a lot of my friends and family to get at me. It happened-”

On Halloween,” Jake said.

You’ve heard the story,” John said.

Who hasn’t?” Jake asked. “Michael Loomis. It was like five years ago, wasn’t it?”

2007,” John replied.

And that boy...What happened to the brother, he died right?” Jake asked.

No,” John said, shaking his head. “No, he faked his death. And now he’s a student at a very posh, private school in Wichita Kansas, and plans to become a prosecutor after college.”

What?” Jake asked.

Hoping and praying every year, that his brother won’t find him,” John finished. Jake sat staring at John with a look of shock on his face before he continued talking.

So, you’ve been living with this for five years?” he asked.

John nodded. “Something like that.”

Well, Billy, I mean John, you don’t think that after all this time, he’d still be coming after you, do you?”

John waited a few seconds before replying. “He sat in a sanitarium for 15 years waiting for me. And then one rainy night, he decides to go trick-or-treating.”

How old were you?”

I was 13. I’m sorry I didn’t tell you before, but I had to stay silent for my protection. Let’s get out of here.” John and Jake paid for their food and then exited the restaurant. They walked up some stairs and ended up outside.

Need a cab?” Jake asked.

No thanks, I’m not that far, I’ll walk.” John replied. As they walked, they didn’t notice a car creeping up behind them.

Hey, I’m sorry I’m such a buzzkill.”

Don’t worry about it, you’re a pretty tough guy for telling me all that,” Jake said.

Suddenly, the car behind them sped up a bit before coming up right next to them. Three shots were fired from the back seat window. Jake dropped to the ground as the last two shots were fired, before the car sped away, and a police officer nearby ran after it. Jake turned his attention to John, who was laying on the ground barely conscious in a pool of blood.

John!” he exclaimed. “No, no, no, no, no, no,” he panted as he crawled over to John and examined him. “Somebody, call an ambulance! Call 911 right now!” Jake then put his hand over John’s wound on his shoulder and tried to stop the bleeding, tears flowing from his eyes. “John, it’s okay John. You’re gonna be fine, you’re gonna be just fine.” Even though his eyes were still open, John did not respond. Jake shook John trying to get him to respond. “John, John, John, John, come on. Don’t go yet, you can still make it.”


Two days later, Jake sat by himself in his office. On his desk was a newspaper proclaiming John’s death with the headline “No Leads on Slain Survivor of Halloween Massacre.” While he was sitting, someone knocked on his door. He answered it, and a uniformed officer stood at the door.

Jake Michaels?” he growled. Jake nodded. “I need you to come with me.”

As they exited his house, Jake spotted three police vehicles along with men dressed like the secret service.

What’s going on here?” he asked.

Somebody wanted to see you. He’s been a little pain-in-the-ass, but we decided to allow it,” the officer replied.

One of the suited men opened the back right door of the suburban police vehicle. A person exited with some difficulty. It was John. Jake’s eyes widened in shock as realized John was exiting the car and was not dead.

I am so sorry about all of this,” John said, close to tears.

Your funeral’s tomorrow,” Jake replied, crying.

And you are expected to be there,” the officer butted in. “If Loomis can get to John, he can get to you.”

How did you know it was him?” Jake asked.

He sent a message to the officer in charge of my case saying what he had done. He was proud he had finally ‘killed’ me. He also gave away his location in the note and says he’s not going anywhere.”

John is going to work with us now,” the officer said.

Until Michael is arrested or otherwise dealt with,” John added. “I’m going to go after him once my funeral is over. He won’t be expecting an attack from me directly so we will catch him by surprise. I wanted to tell you just in case anything happens.”

I’ll go with you,” Jake said.

Jake, are you sure you want to risk your life for me?” John asked.

Absolutely. Nobody tries to kill my best friend in front of me and gets away with it. We will take care of him together.”


On Halloween night, the police stormed the warehouse where Michael Loomis was held up along with the people who worked for him. The police arrested all his workers, but could not find Michael himself. John approached the officer in charge who was standing with Jake in front of the gate, waiting for orders.

Go,” John said.

What?” the office replied.

Go. I will draw Michael out myself. He will want a fight from me. I’m sure he already knows I’m here so that’s why he’s hid himself.”

John-” Jake started before being cut off.

Jake, I’ll be fine. I’m a survivor, you know that. I just need to be sure you are safe. Here, take this,” he said, taking off his necklace and giving it to him. “For luck. I’m okay. Just go with the police.”

Jake and the police officers then left the property. John closed the gate with the switch. As he watched them go away from the property and prepare for a possible counterattack, John picked up a nearby rock, and threw it on the switch, trapping himself in there with Michael. He then began to walk inside before he spotted an axe in a glass case. John walked toward it and kicked at the glass, breaking it, and grabbed the axe. He then proceeded to the entrance of the warehouse before stopping just short of it. He stood there taking a breath before screaming.

MICHAEL!” He shouted his brother’s name in twice more once he was inside and stormed around the warehouse, looking for Michael.

He was walking on the upper-level when he heard something that made him stop. On the ceiling, Michael was hanging from the pipes and was slowly lowering himself. John waited for the right moment to strike. Michael then lowered himself completely, holding a knife in his hand. John spun around and struck Michael in the shoulder. Michael brought his knife and and sliced John’s left arm. John fell over and looked at his wound, the exact same spot where he had been cut by Michael originally.

John ran away from Michael, who pulled the axe out of his shoulder, shook it off and then threw the axe to the ground to follow John. John had found a kitchen and was locating the knives. Michael followed him to the kitchen. Michael kicked aside the objects John had used to slow him down and proceeded to John. John began throwing knives at Michael, but they all missed. He then grabbed the drawer where he had gotten the knives and used it to block Michael’s stab at him. John then kicked Michael in the groin. Michael grunted and shoved John over. John grabbed two knives and ran from the kitchen. Michael pulled his knife out of the drawer before following John.
He walked right in front of where John was hiding before John attacked. John stabbed him multiple times in the chest area before Michael fell down to the ground floor, apparently dead. John threw down the knives, grabbed the axe and left the warehouse, thinking Michael wasn’t truly dead.

Back outside, he let the police break open the gate door before he requested they step back again and leave a car for him. The police allowed his request before they retreated again. John entered the car and prepared for his next move. A few minutes later, Michael exited the building, and was looking around for John when John slammed on the gas pedal. He hit Michael with the car and continued driving it toward the building. He smiled almost evilly at Michael before the car crashed into the door, pinning Michael between it and the car.

John quickly recovered, grabbed the axe and left the car. He limped over to the front where Michael was slumped over. He stopped when he was in front of Michael and spoke.

Michael...Michael,” he said, as Michael began stirring and looking around. When he didn’t respond, John spoke again. “Michael,” he said with more assertion.

Michael looked up at John. His face seemed full of remorse with what he had done. He reached out his hand as if he wanted to touch John. John simply looked at Michael, who then spoke in a raspy voice.

John...” was all he said. John then reached for Michael’s hand and the brothers’ fingers barely touched for a few seconds before John lowered his hand. He took a few deep breaths before swinging the axe and decapitating Michael. John turned away from Michael’s body, threw the axe to the ground and sighed, knowing that his brother had finally been defeated.

He walked toward the destroyed entrance where Jake and the police officers were gathering.

“Are you okay?” Jake asked before hugging John.
I’m fine,” John replied. “Michael is gone and can’t hurt anyone ever again. I’ve never been better in my life.”

EPIC Random Writing

This is another Random Writing I did with a Facebook status and people commenting on it with a subject for me to comment on and then I compiled all of my comments together. Enjoy!

My mother comes up with the most random shit ever for me to write about. Toilet paper has many uses, it's a wonder the peeps over in 'Nam can go without it. Chuck Norris, as it's been pointed out by Trent, can't even begin to fathom my awesomeness. Gandhi is a guy who I don't know much about. An aglet is a small plastic or metal sheath typically used on each end of a shoelace, cord, or drawstring. Pens are great for making things colorful when you write. The meaning of life is 42. Coconut Pound Cake just doesn't sound good because it has coconut in it. Peeing is always good, especially in the middle of the night when you have a very full bladder. 69 is the most sexual of all numbers. Fish are things you can catch in a lake and then clean for eating. Gravity is the reason we are all here. Mariocart is a very addicting game. Clearly the chicken came first and just magically appeared before laying the egg. But wait, how do we know the egg didn't magically appear before hatching a chicken? Eh...it could go either way. Band kids gone wild makes for one fucked up family that is hella confusing. Cornucopia is a symbol of abundance and nourishment. If your aorta goes out, you're kinda screwed. A screwdriver can either be a flathead or a Phillips head; it's good to know the difference so you don't look like a moron when trying to fix something. A polynomial is something I will never use in my real life. Ever. Star Trek is a television show that I haven't watched and that I used to think was a copycat of Star Wars before I found out that it was made long before Star Wars. Dark Shadows is a vampire movie where Johnny Depp is a vampire who doesn't sparkle! Sandals are the only open toed shoes that are actually shoes unlike those imitation flip flop things. A corncob tastes way better than corn by itself. People who see the Basilisk in Harry Potter will be petrified, so long as they don't look it in the eye. An onomatopoeia is not only a fun word to say, but it is the word for sound words, which are really fun say! A cork can used to close a bottle of wine. Velcro is this really loud annoying sticking device that can be used instead of shoe laces. Pants are always good and people are luck that I remember them when I'm tired. A scalping knife is used to scalp dead people's heads, which is kinda creepy in its own right. A dress is something women wear, but also men, but men should do so only if they are a Drag Queen, like in “To Wong Foo: Thanks for Everything! Julie Newmar” - the best Drag Queen movie ever! Rainbow occur after rain sometimes. They also represent gay pride, which is totally rad. A sword is a really long knife. A caterpillar is the ancestor of a butterfly. In a recliner, you can lean back and put your feet on the foot rest unlike with an armchair. Freddy vs. Jason is a very cheesy horror movie so cheesy that it's hilarious! Jason vs. Michael Myers would be pretty epic and I don't think a battle between them would ever end because neither of them ever die. Godzilla vs. King Kong sounds kinda interesting and I would pay to see it. Chuck Norris vs. Jackie Chan would be a mega epic battle where lots of ass kicking would occur. Simon Cowell is one of the biggest douchebags ever, but he is hilarious with his sarcastic comments! Paula Deen is an American cook, cooking show host, restaurateur, author, actress and Emmy Award-winning television personality. The cerebellum is a region of the brain that plays an important role in motor control. Nail polish sometimes pollutes the air of the Andover High School newsroom and make my nose wrinkle. 23 is the number after 22 and before 24. 1985 was a common year starting on a Tuesday that was designated as the Youth Year by the United Nations. No I don't speak Espanol, I speak English. Portugal is a country situated in southwestern Europe on the Iberian Peninsula. Portugal is the westernmost country of mainland Europe, and is bordered by the Atlantic Ocean to the west and by Spain to the North and East. Noodles and pasta are both really good foods and often, noodles are the pasta. The Count of Monte Cristo has way too many damn charcters in it, which makes it very confusing. A cowbell is a bell by freely roaming livestock, so that they do not run away or wander off without being heard.

The Most Random Writing Ever


I posted a Facebook status a few months ago asking for writing ideas and my friend, Trent, decided to comment random things on the status for me to comment on. As a result, all of my comments were complied to make the most random writing ever! Enjoy!

Spongebob lives in a pineapple under the sea. A horseshoe is an object, normally made of metal, that is designed to protect a horse’s hoof from wear and tear. Peter Griffin uses hand grenades in an episode of Family Guy to help him think about how to get rich. Jumping jacks are a great way to warm up before exercising. Relationships are so complex, not even a “relationships expert” can begin to explain them. Happiness is something every person should experience in their lifetime, and they should take full advantage of it. At least one glass of water should be drank every day. Ideally, one should drink 6-8 glasses of water to stay hydrated. One could spend a long time trying to figure out what to do with a three centimeter long piece of string. Verna Hopkins Wommack is the coolest person alive; words just cannot describe it. An aglet is a small plastic or metal sheath that is great for keeping the fibers of the lace or cord from unraveling on a shoelace, cord, or drawstring. A shoe is something required by most places to enter the establishment. An establishment is a place where people can go to shop, relax, eat etc. My friends are sexy ‘nough said. Participating in several activities is a good idea to help highschoolers with their futures. Activities are a great way for people to get involved in things they love to do. Love, like relationships, is so complex that not even an “expert” on love can begin to describe it. To describe something is to tell how it correlates to each of the five senses. A correlation is the mutual relation between to or more things. Or is used to connect words, phrases and even clauses representing alternatives. A clause is usually the end of a contract, will or treaty, and is usually the binding part of the legal document. Being an agnostic theist and a Democrat, I am the exact opposite of what most Kansans are labeled as. Michael Raehpour is a beautiful man, and is the trumpet god. When something is legal, it is not punishable by law. A law is any written or positive rule or collection of rules prescribed under the authority of the state or nation. If something is written, it is expressed in writing. To express is to show, manifest, or reveal. To show is to cause or allow to be seen. When one allows something, they give permission to or for something to happen. For something to happen, it takes place, comes to pass or occurs. Passing is moving past something or moving by something. Something is literally some thing. A thing is a material object without life or consciousness. Santa Claus is a jolly old elf who gives presents to children all over the world on Christmas Eve.

A Behind-The-Scenes look at my novel "Rise to the Top"


So I decided to coincide with my book being listed on Amazon, I should give people who have read or are reading my book a behind-the-scenes look at how I went about creating the story, and where I got some of the ideas from. Enjoy!!


All of this started for me on November 4, 2011. That afternoon, I went to the Andover State Bank to deliver a copy of The Trojan Bluestreak newspaper to Andrea Menousek, a very good friend of mine. I asked her if our writing group would be doing any meetings in the near future, and she told me probably not because she wasy busy working on NaNoWriMo (National Novel Writing Month). I asked her about it, and she suggested I look it up.

So I went home and did some research. Knowing I could easily take on the challenge of writing a 50,000 word novel in a span on 30 days (26 for me at that point), I signed up right away. After signing up, the story just sort of popped into my mind.

After writing the prologue and roughly the first half of chapter one, I took a break for the day, and began to outline the rest of the book.

From the very start, I knew basically the entire version of the plot, well I at least knew the basic version of it. I knew there would be four chapters. I knew what would happen in each chapter of the book relating to Brendan's life. I knew the first three chapters would be mostly highlights of Brendan's journalistic career with the final chapter focusing on his involvement in a murder spree. However, I didn't know the entire plot, and the rest came to me as I went along.

For instance, the character Darren Thomas was originally only supposed to appear at Brendan and Gale's wedding. In fact, the name of him was just pulled out of the air. I needed a name for the best friend of the main character and the first name that came to mind was Darren because of my good friend Darren Jones. As I went along writing about the murder spree, Darren (in the book) had a much larger role, eventually becoming a third protagonist.

All of the names which appear in the novel are somehow based on real-life people. In some cases, I simply combined the first name of someone with the last name of somebody else to create their name. But the principal characters were not just named uniquely, they were all based off of important people in my life.

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Main Character Information

Brendan Hopkins: Obviously, he is based off of me. I like to think of Brendan as a "shadowy reflection" of myself. He is very much like me in many ways with fictional elements to his character woven in with the elements based off myself.

Gale Riley-Hopkins: I took Gale's name from the character Gale Weathers in the "Scream" horror movie series. I imagined her as being more like Gale Weather's husband Dewey, but since my main character needed a wife, I made my Gale. She is very much like Dewey, with Brendan being very much like Gale Weathers.

Darren Thomas: Like I said, I originally only intended for the best friend of the main character to appear at the wedding. However, as I was writing chapter four, I needed the main target of the murder spree (besides Brendan) to have some sort of strong connection to Brendan, and that's how Darren was introduced back into chapter four, and slowly became a third main character. He is loosely based on his namesake, Darren Jones, with both of them being extremely smart individuals. What makes them different in the character Darren is more vulnerable than my friend Darren. 

Mrs. Callaway: She is entirely based off my journalism adviser, Mrs. Kristin Baker. Her last name is actually Mrs. Baker's maiden name that I decided to use to make the character somewhat fictional. She is very like Mrs. Baker since she did help jumpstart a journalists's career.

Bobby Hopkins: Bobby is very much like Roman Bridger and Jill Roberts, the killers in Scream 3 and 4 respectively. Like Roman, he is a product of a mistaken pregnancy and was spent his entire life looking for his parents, and was rejected by them. As a result, he seeked his revenge against his parents and the brother who got the life he always sought. Like Jill, he wanted to gain fame as the ultimate killer of someone who has escaped death from other similar killers (Sidney Prescott in the Scream movies, Darren Thomas in my book).

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Major Plot Details

Brendan's journalistic career - Most of the stories in the book written by Brendan were all fictional stories, some based off real events. I think only one actual story written by me that was published in the real-life Trojan Bluestreak made it into the book. That story was the one about Kids 4 Kids. I had intended for my column on human rights to appear in the book, but for some reason, it never made it in, yet there is still mention of it.

Darren's backstory - Before his reappearance in chapter four, Darren was targeted three times by different people to be killed. I don't really know why he was picked, but I based his backstory off of the first three movies in the Scream horror movies series (obviously one of my favorites).  When he appears in chapter four, it's been about five years since the last failed attempt on his life , and he has moved on from those events. His self-help book is meant to be the final part of him moving on with his life. He chose Wichita as the final stop on his book tour, and ironically enough, another murder spree starts, and Darren is once again the target. Like I said, his story is very much like Sidney Prescott's but I wanted to show that men can be just as vulnerable as women  in something like this.

Bobby's murder spree - Inspired mostly by Jill Roberts and Charlie Walker's killing spree in Scre4m (Scream 4). I had him target the same sort of people, but with a different motivation: get revenge on his parents for not accepting him as a son, and at the same time, finally take out Darren Thomas, something three others had previously failed to do.

Henry's attack at the end of the book - When I was writing the ending of the novel when Brendan accepts his Pulitzer Prize, I wanted some sort of major dramatic twist that would totally catch the reader off guard. After re-reading the section where Brendan berates his parents for not telling him the truth about Bobby, and virtually blaming his father for causing the murder spree, I decided to make Henry snap. I wanted the reader to see the powerful impact words have on others, and I think Henry's attack on Brendan truly demonstrates that.

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Final Thoughts:

I just want to express how much fun I had writing this novel. From the very first day, I knew it would be easy for me to achieve my goal in the NaNoWriMo challenge, and all I had to do was tell myself I could do it, and I did. I'm very grateful I did this project; I think it could help jumpstart a writing career for me - one that's not just in journalism. I want to once again extend a special thanks to Alicia Renich for drawing my cover for me, and Darren Jones for volunteering to be my editor. And I want to thank everyone who has read my book, and I hope this little behind-the-scenes looks of it gave you a new insight into the story of Brendan Hopkins and his rise to the top.